A Short Story
Man, this was awesome. Really enjoyed it. Cleverly done.
So inspiring I resigned from my job! Good writing.
No, that's a lie, I don't have a job.... but if I did... I would have resigned.
So good!! What a creative literary conceit (If I’m using that term correctly?!) I love your technique of the changing meanings of the initials becoming like a Greek chorus, commenting on the plot and advancing it. And it ends with her finally standing for something. Standing (up) for herself. I agree with Sharron’s use of CPS… Congrats Perfect Story!
Congratulations! Perfect Story!
That was awesome I liked the premise! Keep up the good work Lyle
Hi Lyle, what kind of writing do you coach? You’re so versatile I assume it’s anything the client wants…. fiction, essay/blog type writing, even poetry!? I sometimes subliminally and then overtly notice your effective techniques in your writing, and also I sometimes look for them before being aware of them on first reading; I’m intrigued by them and realize how much they add, and I assume you teach those techniques (techniques which are evidence you would be a wonderful writing coach! 😍 I’m not in the market right now, but I will forward to friends. I learn so much from you here!