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Fizzy's avatar

I really enjoyed this, very well laid out. Read like a velvety smooooth chocolate cake. Loved the time warp, this was like a scene from some movie I might be watching.

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Lyle McKeany's avatar

Thanks! I hadn’t reread this one in a while. I think I can use part of it for my book!

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